literature

Let it rain no more.

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The-Bread-Man
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It is raining
What will you do?
It is raining,
Hey i am talking to you.
It is raining
and you shall never be free.
It is raining
all you have left is me.
It is raining
And you should be full of fear.
It is raining
While your end is near.
It is raining
and I deal the final blow.
It is raining
I try to dig a grave but the mud makes me slow.
It is raining
So I head indoors
The rain has stopped
And you are no more.
Hey, looks like I'm back!
This started as a small little tune I was telling myself and then It just went dark. I couldn't help but to agree with myself that this made good poetry.
Enjoy you're dark and stormy nights everyone!
Also, it's hot chocolate season! My favorite winter pastime!
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I3I
Excellent atmosphere and rhythm;
just by reading the narration in my head gave me a clear visualization
of the psychopath and his victim.
The weather over here made it even more perfect.
Thank you for sharing this piece.