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Bike, Backpack and Bullets Pt. 2

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In the following months I traveled from town to town seeing the aftermath of the quake firsthand. I've meet the survivors and heard their stories, a few of which caught my attention. They've been rumors of "The melting man" or "Ooze Beasts", an anomaly that had the survivors gripped with fear. I think it's high time someone investigated these stories. I may have traveled around a bit but, i had yet to travel towards the cities that were nearest to the epicenter. Although i couldn't possibly imagine or begin to understand the horrors that people experienced being that close to the quake, I headed out towards the epicenter. The roads were difficult and the nights grew cold as I rode through the countryside.
part two! I typically write these in class when i'm bored. This is as far as i've gotten on paper but i have a few ideas where it should go from here. 
Should the main character arrive during the day or night? you decide which of the two paths you'd like to read. comment below with your vote as well as any questions you may have.
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I vote s/he arrive at night. Sounds more suspenseful.
Question: are you planning to rewrite these with more details? I want to know more of how s/he met the survivors, why they didn't go with him/her, or how the main character is surviving on his/her own or how did s/he know of these tactics. Details like that that can be developed as the story progresses. Are we still at the drafting processes?